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Junior Fair 2026-06-20 · Space and Earth wonders (off-topic from assigned articles) · Reviewed June 28, 2026

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💪 Areas to Improve

📝 Exercise Review

What I Learned

Completeness: partial · Depth: surface

The student wrote about space and Earth, but did not mention any facts from the assigned articles. The ideas are interesting but off-topic.

My Favorite Part

Completeness: partial · Depth: surface

The student listed three points about space and Earth, but none relate to the three assigned articles. The responses show personal interest but not comprehension of the readings.

New Words

Completeness: partial · Accuracy: fair

The student listed 'asteroid' and 'meteorite' with definitions, but did not write complete sentences using them. 'Volcano' and 'probe' are also listed but not used in sentences. The vocabulary is not from the assigned articles.

Draw It

Completeness: missing

No drawing was submitted for this assignment.

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Week 2 charlotte

1. What I learned
The space is very interesting. Our Earth Mother is the only
planet that have lives. And it have many wonders, Like volcanoes.
But some people belive Mars have lives, too.
2. My Favorite Part
① 16 Psyche is a asteroid that was found by a probe called
NASA's Psyche space. The space is so amazing!
② So if a human dig the Earth, we can only dig the Crust's soil.
Because the Land crust is 8 to 70 km thick. Human's power is so
small!
③ Even though a volcano is very dangerous, it is good to many
animals, too But I don't like volcanoes anyway.
3. New Word
asteroid In the space, there are many asteroids.
meteorite The meteorite makes the moon's surface bumpy.
-volcano INTERESTING SPACE
Mars
Earth
probe
Charlotte wrote about space topics, but these are not from the assigned articles on topology, sneaker squeaks, and onion chopping. She shows curiosity and effort, but needs to focus on the given readings. The 'new words' section includes good vocabulary but lacks sentences using the words correctly.

✏️ Grammar & Spelling

OriginalCorrection
have liveshas life
it have many wondersit has many wonders
Like volcanoeslike volcanoes
belivebelieve
a asteroidan asteroid
NASA's Psyche spaceNASA's Psyche spacecraft
dig the Earthdig into the Earth
Crust's soilcrust's soil
Human's powerHumans' power
it is good to many animals, too Butit is good for many animals, too. But

📝 Transcribed Text

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What I Learned 
The space is very interesting. Our Earth Mother is the only planet that have lives. And it have many wonders, Like volcanoes. But some people belive Mars have lives, too.
My Favorite Part 
① 16 Psyche is a asteroid that was found by a probe called NASA's Psyche space. The space is so amazing! ② So if a human dig the Earth, we can only dig the Crust's soil. Because the Land crust is 8 to 70 km thick. Human's power is so small! ③ Even though a volcano is very dangerous, it is good to many animals, too But I don't like volcanoes anyway.
New Words 
asteroid In the space, there are many asteroids. meteorite The meteorite makes the moon's surface bumpy. -volcano INTERESTING SPACE Mars Earth probe
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