You wrote about Earth and Mars having life, but the articles were about Mars flyby, Earth's layers, and volcano facts. Try to mention something specific from each article, like the metal asteroid or Earth's inner core.
You picked one interesting point from each article and explained why you liked it. Good job! For the volcano part, you shared your opinion, which is nice.
You used 'asteroid' and 'meteorite' in sentences. The sentences make sense and show you understand the words. Well done!
You wrote some words related to space and Earth, but I don't see a clear drawing described. Next time, try to draw a picture of something you learned, like the Psyche probe or Earth's layers.
Week 2 charlotte 1. What I learned The space is very interesting. Our Earth Mother is the only planet that have lives. And it have many wonders, like volcanoes. But some people belive Mars have lives, too. 2. My Favorite Part @ 16 Psyche is a asteroid that was found by a probe called NASA's Psyche space. The space is so amazing! @ So if a human dig the Earth, we can only dig the Crust's soil. Because the Land crust is 8 to 70 km thick. Human's power is so small! @ Even though a volcano is very dangerous, it is good to many animals, too. But I don't like volcanoes anyway. 3. New Word asteroid In the space, there are many asteroids. meteorite The meteorite makes the moon's surface bumpy. interesting space Earth Mars ee volcano probe
| Original | Correction |
|---|---|
| have lives | has life |
| belive | believe |
| a asteroid | an asteroid |
| dig the Earth | dig through the Earth |
| Crust's soil | crust's soil |
| Human's power | Humans' power |
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The space is very interesting. Our Earth Mother is the only planet that have lives. And it have many wonders, like volcanoes. But some people belive Mars have lives, too.
@ 16 Psyche is a asteroid that was found by a probe called NASA's Psyche space. The space is so amazing! @ So if a human dig the Earth, we can only dig the Crust's soil. Because the Land crust is 8 to 70 km thick. Human's power is so small! @ Even though a volcano is very dangerous, it is good to many animals, too. But I don't like volcanoes anyway.
asteroid In the space, there are many asteroids. meteorite The meteorite makes the moon's surface bumpy.
interesting space Earth Mars ee volcano probe