What I Learned
Completeness: complete · Depth: fair
The student listed three things learned, but the sentences are short and have errors. 'Scientists invented the virtual reality' → Suggest: 'Scientists are using virtual reality in new ways.' 'Our brain even belive VR' → Suggest: 'Our brain can even believe what it sees in VR.' 'The world Cup and the Winter Olympics is popular' → Suggest: 'The World Cup and the Winter Olympics are popular events.' Good effort in summarizing.
My Favorite Part
Completeness: complete · Depth: fair
The student gave a favorite part for each article. For the Olympics: 'Athletes can choose their own path on untouched snow. I hope the athletes can enjoy them.' → Suggest: 'I hope the athletes enjoy it.' For pink cleats: 'A man wears a pink shoes? That's very odd.' → Suggest: 'A man wearing pink shoes? That seems odd to me.' For VR: 'Some times even our brain belived in the VR world. After somedays training our body parts, brain will adapt them.' → Suggest: 'Sometimes our brain believes in the VR world. After some days of training, our brain adapts to new body parts.' The personal reaction is nice.
New Words
Completeness: complete · Accuracy: good
Two words attempted: 'adapt' and 'deliberate'. 'I finally adapt the cellphone' → Suggest: 'I finally adapted to the new cellphone.' 'They wear pink cleats deliberately' is correct and shows understanding of the article. Good vocabulary choice.
Draw It
Completeness: complete
The student labeled the drawing with 'skating pink cleats virtual reality VRD'. This shows they connected all three articles. The drawing itself is not described in detail, but the labels indicate comprehension. Next time, encourage a short sentence describing the drawing.
TPM
WIB - Junior - July 11, 2026
Word
My Sentence
adapt
I finally adapt the cellphone.
4 Draw It!
Draw something from this week's articles:
skating pink cleats virtual reality
VRD
Page 1 shows the 'New Words' and 'Draw It' sections. The vocabulary work is good—'adapt' and 'deliberate' are used in mostly correct sentences. 'I finally adapt the cellphone' needs a tense fix: 'I finally adapted to the cellphone.' The drawing is labeled with keywords from the articles, showing good recall. Focus on using correct verb tenses and prepositions.
[ ] Read & Think
What did you learn today?
1 What I Learned
Write 2-3 new things you learned this week:
Scientists invented the virtual reality. Our brain even belive VR.
The world Cup and the Winter Olympics is popular, too.
2 My Favorite Part
1. "Winter Olympics 2030: New Sports Like Synchronised Figure Skating" - what
was the most interesting part?
Athletes can choose their own path on untouched snow. I hope the athletes can
2. "Why Pink Cleats Have Taken Over The World Cup" - what was the most enjoy them.
interesting part?
A man wears a pink shoes? That's very odd.
3. "VR Can Train the Brain to Treat Wings Like Real Limbs" - what was the most
interesting part?
Some times even our brain belived in the VR world. After somedays training
our body parts, brain will adapt
them. the
3 New Words I Remember
Write two new words. Try each in a sentence!
Word My Sentence
deliberate They wear pink cleats deliberately.
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Page 2 contains 'What I Learned' and 'My Favorite Part'. The student understood the main ideas: VR can trick the brain, pink cleats are a trend, and freeride skiing allows free paths. However, sentences are choppy and have spelling errors ('belive', 'somedays', 'belived'). The favorite part for the pink cleats article shows personal reaction ('That's very odd'), which is great. Work on sentence flow and proofreading for common spelling mistakes.
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