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Senior Fair 2026-07-25 · Student demonstrates understanding of article content but struggles with spelling, grammar, and natural English phrasing. · Reviewed July 26, 2026

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💪 Areas to Improve

📝 Exercise Review

Comprehension Check

Completeness: complete · Accuracy: good

All four main ideas are correctly identified, though phrasing is simple. Good enough for a grade 9 level.

Vocab Builder

Completeness: complete

Three words provided with sentences. The sentences are grammatically acceptable except 'bilingual' sentence missing an article. Spelling error in header.

Critical Thinking

Completeness: complete · Depth: fair

Student answered all discussion prompts across the four articles. Responses show understanding but lack depth and contain many language errors. Some points are well-reasoned (e.g., fairness vs. profit tension). Need to work on clear expression.

See It Differently

Completeness: missing · Depth: surface

The assigned See It Differently exercise (main idea of university societies article) was not answered. The student instead answered the discussion prompts for that article, which are categorized under critical_thinking. This section is missing.

Quick Write

Completeness: complete · Depth: surface

Answered the question, but the answer is vague and contains a subject-verb agreement error ('The articles uses' should be 'The articles use'). Could mention specific examples from the articles.

📸 Homework Images

Page 1
2026.7.25
1 AI Bias
1. I think they should. Firstly, the company uses
AI to hire people who are more snitable for the job, so
keeping it fair can increase the possibility of hiring the
right person. Second, the job-looking market needs a
just atomosphere to be recognized by candidates.
2. From the standpoint of company profit, the
outcome certainly justify the bias. AI do hire more
productive workers to bring higher company profit.
But from the view of societal fairness, it doesn't.
Over thousands of years, people have been seeking justice.
We form court, regulate laws, set up organizations to
protect equality. Now AI hire people by stereotyping.
Though they might be productive, but its against our
principle of being even.
3. I feel irritated and disappointed. It's not my
fault that one people from my ethnic group couldn't suit
the job, and I did expect the company to be more
just than this. I want the firm to know that you
could judge a person by its ethnic group. If they keep
hiring like this, they will reach their own doom.
Content accurately reflects the AI bias article; student understands the study and gives reasoned opinions. However, phrasing is awkward and contains several errors: 'snitable' should be 'suitable', 'atomosphere' should be 'atmosphere', 'its against our principle' should be 'it's against our principle', 'you could judge a person by its ethnic group' should be 'you shouldn't judge a person by their ethnic group'. The sentence 'AI do hire more productive workers' should be 'AI does hire more productive workers'. Overall, ideas are clear but need grammatical polish.
Page 2
Read & Respond.
1. LLM are used in hiring people for candidates, but
research shows that they might be more biased
than normal people.
2. Research shows that learning more than one language
may slow down brain aging to some degree.
3. New York is applying power lines to reduce fuel
burning, but draught and outbreaks make its electricity
sources unstable.
4. The university society may give me both good and
bad memories. The artical calls on graduates to
share their experience with "freshers".
5. The articles uses specific numbers and research
results to show their opinion
Word Bank.
Word
Sentense.
segregation.
The city finally ended racial segregation in
its public schools in 1976.
incentives.
The company offers financial incentives to
employees who exceed their sales targets.
bilingual
Being bilingual gives you a significant
advantage in global job market.
Comprehension check answers are brief but capture main ideas correctly. Quick Write answer is somewhat vague; 'show their opinion' should be 'support their arguments'. For Vocab Builder, the word 'bilingual' sentence is missing 'the' before 'global job market'. Spelling error: 'sentense' should be 'sentence'. The student correctly used the three words in sentences, showing understanding of their meaning.
Page 3
IV. University Societies
1. I think its smarter to focus on just one or two.
Because a persons' energy and time are limited. Only
when you focus on fewer people that can you have better
relationships with them. As for me. I joined lots of clubs
when I'm six grade, including dancing, chorus, basketball.
But I find it hard to build truely deep connections with
like, tens of people. So in middle school, I only attended
the singing club where I met 2 two lovely girls who
share the same interest with me. We often have lunch
together and encourage each other now.
2. "Worst" experiences often give people a low mood so
they can stay quiet and reflect on themselves, then they
gain lessons and motivation from it and move on. For example,
once I failed a test, giving me opportunities to revise my
knowledges and study method, then I had a high score
during the next one.
3. I would create a university society where everyone's
talents and unigness are shared and appreciated through
diverse activities. It would create an inclusive atomosphere,
make the university everyones' home.
Good personal examples and clear reasoning. Spelling errors: 'unigness' should be 'uniqueness', 'atomosphere' should be 'atmosphere'. The phrase 'truely deep connections' should be 'truly deep connections'. Also 'like, tens of people' is informal; suggest 'many people'. The student's reflection on worst experiences is relevant. Overall shows engagement with the prompts.
Page 4
III. Power line.
the electricity isn't smooth and assumable up to now,
with outages, drought and climate change. Natural
disasters may shut down all electricity sources for the
power line, and the delivering infrastructure meet challenges.
Therefore, it's better to rely on smaller sources since
they work possibly close down at once.

2. I might care more about the damage it brings to
my own farm instead of environmental benefits the able bring
My livelihood depends on water, So drought and bugs
are already driving me crazy. Now here comes a power
line which use precious water. I think I can't bear it.

3. Firstly, the teaching problems are normal for
how infrastructures and other power lines have had similar
startup issues. Second, the challenges we met are
A kind of opportunity to infinite and improve the
power lines if we look at it from another way.
The student correctly identifies risks of relying on a single power line. However, phrasing is unclear in places: 'the electricity isn't smooth and assumable' – likely meant 'reliable'. 'Natural disasters may shut down all electricity sources for the power line' could be clearer. 'the able bring' appears to be 'the table'? Probably 'the table' but context unclear. Also 'teething problems' is misspelled as 'teaching problems'. The student attempts perspective-taking well.
Page 5
Date.
II Learning Language.
1. I think it may because they have more complex social
network and more inter-personnel connections. The article
said people speak more than one language age more
slowly than those who speaks only one. It may because
aquiring a new language allows them to build connections
with various people, so the process of managing a more
complex social network slows down aging.
2. Play a musical instrument may slow down aging too.
According to the study, the mental effort of switching
build "cognitive reserves" that protects the brain from decline.
When playing an instrument, the extra attention of switching
between daily life and the field of art may have the
same effect.
3. Recently, I decide to learn French at 70 years old.
It was truely difficult at first, with my bad memory.
But I keep practising, having a little progress each day.
Slowly, my tiny steps accenmilate into a huge leap.
Now I can not only speak a few French lines but
also, think clearly. I felt younger and happier.
Good attempt at explaining other factors and drawing parallels to musical instrument. Spelling errors: 'aquiring' should be 'acquiring', 'inter-personnel' should be 'interpersonal', 'truely' should be 'truly', 'accemilate' should be 'accumulate'. The final paragraph from a 70-year-old is creative and shows understanding of the article's claim. Tense consistency could be improved: 'I felt younger' is past tense but the paragraph is in present tense overall.

✏️ Grammar & Spelling

OriginalCorrection
snitablesuitable
atomosphereatmosphere
its against our principleit's against our principle
by its ethnic groupby their ethnic group
AI do hireAI does hire
sentensesentence
in global job marketin the global job market
unignessuniqueness
truelytruly
the able bringthe table (context unclear)
teaching problemsteething problems
infiniterefine (likely intended)
assumablereliable (suggested)
aquiringacquiring
inter-personnelinterpersonal
accemilateaccumulate
The articles usesThe articles use

📝 Transcribed Text

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Comprehension Check
1. LLM are used in hiring people for candidates, but research shows that they might be more biased than normal people. 2. Research shows that learning more than one language may slow down brain aging to some degree. 3. New York is applying power lines to reduce fuel burning, but draught and outbreaks make its electricity sources unstable. 4. The university society may give me both good and bad memories. The article calls on graduates to share their experience with 'freshers'.
Vocab Builder
Word. Sentence. segregation. The city finally ended racial segregation in its public schools in 1976. incentives. The company offers financial incentives to employees who exceed their sales targets. bilingual. Being bilingual gives you a significant advantage in global job market.
Critical Thinking
Pages 1, 3, 4, and 5 contain responses to the discussion prompts for each article. See page notes for details.
See It Differently
Missing: The student did not answer the See It Differently exercise (main idea of the university societies article as a separate task).
Quick Write
5. The articles uses specific numbers and research results to show their opinion.