What I Learned
Completeness: complete · Depth: surface
You listed two new things, but only the auction definition is really developed. 'An auction is were a public sale where people bid to buy items.' → Suggest: 'An auction is a public sale where people bid to buy items.' For the Gus fact, use your own words and past tense: 'Gus the T. rex sold for $50.1 million.'
My Favorite Part
Completeness: complete · Depth: fair
You answered for all three articles and included your own opinion, which is great. Some phrases need smoothing: '@Euplotes gigatrox will eat their smaller brothers a sisters.' → Suggest: 'Euplotes gigatrox grows into a giant and eats smaller members of its own kind.' 'She fight with the sea.' → Suggest: 'She fought to survive in the open sea.' 'Get back to wildlife' → Suggest: 'return to the wild.'
New Words
Completeness: complete · Accuracy: fair
Good choices: exhausted and anonymous are both new words from the articles. The exhausted sentence is understandable but repetitive: 'They were very exhausted after they climb threw the hill.' → Suggest: 'They were exhausted after they climbed over the hill.' The second sentence is hard to read: 'The buyler choose anonymous so no Dhe knew there name.' → Suggest: 'The buyer chose to remain anonymous, so no one knew their name.'
预习教材
及把小数和分数化成百分数
投篮。王涛5投3中,李强6投4中。他们两人的命中率分别是多
次数÷投篮次数
(60)
=0.6=100 =60% 李强的命中率:4÷6~0.667= (667) =66.7%
1000
8.21.
What I learned
An auction is were a public sale where people bid
to buy items. Gus the T. Rex sells for $50.1 Million!
The interesting part.
The auction's final price is much higher than
the estimate of it. I hope the owner will give the
fossil to the museums, then scientists could study
Gus more.
@Euplotes gigatrox will eat their smaller brothers a
sisters. Then they will turn into a hugegiant.
③ Little Reg is very brave to fly about 70 miles from
land. She fight with the sea. I hope she will get
back to wildlife soon.
Word.
They were very exhausted after they climb threw the hill
The buyler choose anonymous so no Dhe knew there
name.
You clearly read all three articles and understood the main facts, such as the auction price, the cannibal giant cells, and Little Reg's rescue. Your personal hope that Gus would go to a museum shows thoughtful engagement. The biggest issue is grammar and spelling in short everyday words. 'An auction is were a public sale' should be 'An auction is a public sale where...' and 'She fight with the sea' should be 'She fought against the sea.' Also, remember to use past tense when telling what already happened: Gus sold, Little Reg flew, and the giant cells acted. Always proofread homophones such as were/where, threw/through, and there/their. If you reread your writing aloud, many of these small mistakes will be easy to fix.
| Original | Correction |
|---|
| An auction is were a public sale where people bid to buy items | An auction is a public sale where people bid to buy items |
| Gus the T. Rex sells for $50.1 Million! | Gus the T. rex sold for $50.1 million. |
| The auction's final price is much higher than the estimate of it | The auction's final price was much higher than the estimate |
| brothers a sisters | brothers and sisters |
| hugegiant | huge giant |
| She fight with the sea | She fought against the sea |
| get back to wildlife | return to the wild |
| very exhausted | exhausted (remove 'very') |
| climb threw the hill | climbed over the hill |
| buyler | buyer |
| choose anonymous | chose to remain anonymous |
| no Dhe knew there name | no one knew their name |
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