What I Learned
Completeness: partial · Depth: surface
You wrote one interesting fact: 'There was a blood moon on Friday morning.' The task asked for 2-3 new things, so add more, such as a fact about the earthquake in Colombia or the chuño potatoes. Also, use 'on Friday morning' instead of 'at Friday morning.'
My Favorite Part
Completeness: complete · Depth: fair
You wrote about all three articles and showed empathy about the earthquake. The ideas are correct, but the sentences have tense shifts and spelling errors. 'Powerful earthquake take many lives' → 'The powerful earthquake took many lives.' For the potato process, 'they stand on the potabo' → 'they stepped on the potatoes.' For the blood moon, 'atomosphere' → 'atmosphere' and 'blood moan' → 'blood moon.'
New Words
Completeness: complete · Accuracy: fair
You gave two vocabulary sentences, but they need clearer context and correct spelling. 'Intact' means undamaged/complete; your sentence is confusing. 'The deed of the house in intact from the water' → 'The house is still intact after the water' (or if 'deed' meant 'door,' 'The door of the house is still intact after the water'). 'Staple' is usually used like 'a staple food'; write 'Potatoes are a staple food in many countries.' Remember it is potato, not 'potatoe.'
Draw It
Completeness: partial
Below 'Draw' you listed 'Powerful Earthquake,' 'Potato,' and 'The blood Moon.' These labels show you chose the right three topics, but I cannot see full drawings or descriptions. Next time add a clear drawing or a caption saying what you drew.
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What I learned.
There was a "blood moon" at Friday morning.
The interesting part.
① Powerful earthquake take many lives and destroyed
many buildings. I'm sorry to hear that.
② Ancient people let potatoes freeze in snow and
then melted them. Next, they stand on the potabo and
squeeze the water out. They were smart!
③ I learned that the eclipse of the moon is called the "blood
moan!" Because the sunlight passes through Earth's atomosphere.
The atmosphere scatters blue light.
Words.
intact: The deed of the house in intact from the water.
staple: Today's staple is potatoe.
Draw
Powerful Earthquake
Potato
The "blood Moon"
Your homework shows you read all three articles carefully and made a personal connection to the earthquake news. The main content is accurate: the earthquake caused loss of life, the potato method involved freezing and pressing out water, and the blood moon is about red light reaching the Moon while blue light is scattered. However, there are several spelling and grammar errors to fix. For example, 'There was a blood moon at Friday morning' should be 'There was a blood moon on Friday morning,' and 'take many lives' needs the past tense 'took many lives.' In your potato answer, 'they stand on the potabo' should be 'they stepped on the potatoes.' The word 'atomosphere' is spelled 'atmosphere,' and 'blood moan' should be 'blood moon.' Your 'intact' sentence is unclear; if you meant 'door,' rewrite it as 'The door of the house is still intact after the water.' Overall, you understood the articles well, so now focus on proofreading and making each sentence complete.
| Original | Correction |
|---|
| There was a "blood moon" at Friday morning. | There was a "blood moon" on Friday morning. |
| Powerful earthquake take many lives and destroyed many buildings. | The powerful earthquake took many lives and destroyed many buildings. |
| Ancient people let potatoes freeze in snow and then melted them. | Ancient people let potatoes freeze outside on cold nights and then thawed them in the sun. |
| they stand on the potabo and squeeze the water out | they stepped on the potatoes and squeezed the water out |
| blood moan | blood moon |
| atomosphere | atmosphere |
| The deed of the house in intact from the water. | The house is still intact after the water. |
| potatoe | potato / potatoes |
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