What I Learned
Completeness: complete · Depth: fair
Listed 2 facts as requested. The sea star point is accurate and shows you caught the article's big conclusion, but 'seed light' → 'send light.' The Jackie sentence correctly notes her death, but 'was died' is wrong: Suggest: 'The famous eagle Jackie died.' Suggest the improved full version: 'The chocolate-chip sea star shows that one structure can do two jobs: send light and strengthen the skeleton. The famous eagle Jackie died.'
My Favorite Part
Completeness: complete · Depth: fair
Gave one interesting detail for each article. The sea star name explanation is correct and clearly interesting to you. Fix 'Chocolat-chip' → 'Chocolate-chip' and 'it's' → 'its.' For Jackie, check the article's exact words: she was the 'first' bald eagle chick known to hatch there, not the 'only.' Also, since Jackie died, use past tense: Suggest: 'Jackie was important because she was the first bald eagle chick known to hatch in Big Bear Valley.' Adding one sentence about why that fact matters to you would make this stronger.
New Words
Completeness: complete · Accuracy: fair
Good word choices connected to your reading: 'refract' relates to the light-bending calcite in the sea star, and 'anemic' relates to Jackie's health condition. However, both sample sentences have grammar problems. 'The sunlight refract on the glass' → Subject-verb agreement fix: 'The sunlight refracts on the glass.' Better: 'The sunlight refracts through the glass' (light refracts when it passes into glass). 'He is found by anemic' is confusing. A clearer model: 'He was found to be anemic' or simply 'The doctor said the eagle was anemic.' When writing example sentences, keep the subject and verb simple, then add a detail.
Draw It
Completeness: partial
You labeled your drawing with 'Sea stars' and 'Jackie,' which shows you knew what to illustrate, but the drawing itself can't be seen in the transcription. Next time, try adding a one-sentence caption underneath each picture, such as 'Sea stars have light cables in their arms' or 'Jackie lived in Big Bear Valley.'
②预习教材
旱及把小数和分数化成百分数
率投篮,王涛5投3中,李强6投4中。他们两人的命中率分别是多
( )次投投篮次数
(667)
-0.6= (60) =60% 李强的命中率:4÷6≈0.667= 1000 =66.7%
100
3×20(60)en%
9.5.
What I learned
The chocolate-chip sea star shows that one structure
can do two jobs: seed light and strengthen the skeleton.
The famous eagle Jackie was died.
My favourite part
① Chocolat-chip sea star got it's name because of the
dark grainy bumps on its arms! That's interesting.
② Jackie is important because she is the only Bald
Eagle that hatched in Big Bear Valley.
Words.
refract: The sunlight refract on the glass.
anemic: He is found by anemic.
Draw
Sea stars
Jackie
Both articles were understood at the main-idea level, which is good to see. The sea star summary is accurate: one structure doing two jobs (sending light and strengthening the skeleton). The phrase 'seed light' is a spelling slip — it should be 'send light.' For Jackie, you wrote 'was died,' but 'die' is never used in passive form; use the simple past: 'The famous eagle Jackie died.' In My Favourite Part, the chocolate-chip sea star name detail is a good pick, but watch spelling: 'Chocolat-chip' → 'Chocolate-chip,' and 'it's' (it is) should be 'its' (possessive). The Jackie fact needs a small correction: the article says she was the first eagle chick known to hatch in Big Bear Valley, not the only one. Your vocabulary words connect well to the articles, but both example sentences need grammar fixes: 'refract' needs an -s with 'sunlight,' and 'He is found by anemic' is unclear — see the grade notes. Also, the top part of your page has math homework about percentages; those notes aren't part of this reading assignment and weren't graded. Overall, solid effort, but proofread your spelling and reread sentences aloud to catch grammar mistakes.
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