Main ideas for articles 1โ4 are generally correct. Article 4 is misdated as 2028 instead of 2026. Article 3 says '5 Biology technology' instead of 'Five biotechnologies'. Q5 evidence is weak: 'scientific words and knowledge' is not a specific evidence citation. Suggest: 'It provide scientific words...' โ 'The article provides specific examples, such as...'
Vocabulary sentences attempted. 'executed by treason' โ 'executed for treason'; 'with stealth' โ 'stealthily'; 'transfer to other markets' โ 'expand into other markets'. The startup sentence needs a colon and clearer meaning.
Thoughtful positions on AI dual-use, ethics of age reversal, AI-designed viruses, and humanoid robots. Uses evidence like 29% maternal deaths and complex tasks without trial-and-error. Grammar errors reduce clarity: 'them them', 'chims', 'these technology', 'infect'. Suggest: 'With quick reactions and fast speed, they are unstoppable' โ 'Their quick reactions make them hard to stop'.
Role-play responses are imaginative. Robot answer uses world models and risk prediction. Skeptic answer raises side effects and population. Innovator answer adopts Paschal Kija's voice. Some phrasing is awkward: 'If I'm the robot' โ 'If I were the robot'; 'trying to find solution' โ 'trying to find a solution'.
Paragraphs are short but address prompts. Transport regulation paragraph is relevant but needs clearer cause-effect. Reprogramming paragraph misses Myc removal. New breakthrough paragraph is speculative but on-topic. Evidence answer is too general. Suggest: 'It provide scientific words and knowledge' โ 'The article provides evidence such as...'
No. 9.12 Date. 1. AI Agents Planning Ahead for the Unexpected 1. I think it is both, depending on how people use it. Of course they can be helpful if people ask them them to deliver packeges or execute tasks that are dangerous to human since they can predict future outcomes, completing complex tasks without real-world -trial-and-error-training. But it can be destructive when people use them to commit chims. With quick reactions and fast speed, they are unstoppable. 2. If I'm the robot, after being pushed over, my brain will search through world models I have been trained with, trying to find solution. I can see that if I keep this position, there will be a litle possibility that someone will help me up, and most likely, a truck will run over me, which gives me a shiver. Therefore, I chose to stand up by myself. 3. It can help with transport regulation in the city. Because planing ahead for the unexpected allows AI agents to transit data of the vehicles' speed on the street to possible dangers that may cause, providing further plans or alarms before accident happens.
II Restore sight. 1. I think it is. Because while most of the people can enjoy the beauty of the world, those with glaucoma are deprived of this ability. By using age-reversal technology to treat the diseases can help people see the world again, which is ethical. 2. Firstly, they would worry about the side-effect of anti-aging. Our gene controls much more than we know, so simply changing one might cause unexpected issues. Also, if anti-aging do happens, the issue of population will be worse with people have endless life and newborn keep giving birth. The earth can no longer support such a growing population. But Lu may address the first one through careful research before putting anything into use. And about the second one, there will be regulation against overdone anti- aging if it do becomes true. 3. It works by introducing 4 key genes into one's body, which are OSKM, so the stem cell will then act as if it was plucked from an embryo. But adding all four will turn people completely into baby- blobs of stem-cell protoplasm, so Lu is keeping only OSK.
No. Date. III. Biotech 1. I think using AI to design new viruses has the greatest potential to improve people's lives. Because as generative AI developing fast now, using them to create the blueprint of DNA of viruses can enable us to use viruses as useful tools in life. From cleaning up pollution to controlling certain disease, this technology can affect all parts of life. 2. Firstly, governments should regulate the usage of these technology strictly, declaring the line between safe and dangerous. Companies should apply the new-tech carefully and keep them under control. Researchers should do sufficient experiments and do enough research to have a full view of what they are designing. With them, the new-tech will work for all people in a good way. 3. I am Paschal kija. My work is a device to treat postpartum hemorrhage - a dangerous bleeding complication after child birth. It's very meaningful to me because here in my country, the complication causes about 29% of maternal deaths. I want to use this technology to help my people.
IV 10. Breakthrough. I think humanoid robots will have the biggest impact in our life. They can be applied to almost every part of our life. From companions to lifesavers and to dilery person. And the developing of these companies will bring huge infect in finance and policy. 2. Base edited baby may bring some negative effect. My point is it is a challenge to the meaning of human existence : if a person's trait can be changed through gene by computers, then who should take the responsibilities? What's the meaning of this people's life if it is just a program designed by others Since he/she was born. We were dealt with what we have by nature, but bring human affect in this process will bring ethical concems. 3. I think reversing the aging process to treat eye disease should also add to the lo important break throughs. This technology includes rewinding the age of cells by resetting them to an embryonic-like state. It may play an important role in treating eye diseases.
No. Date. Read & Respond. 1. Hafner began training AI agents in a world model, giving it the ability to plan ahead in real life tasks. 2. Ryan Lu design an age -reversal tech that could help restore sight. 3. 5 Biology technology are introduced, explaining how they would shape future. 4. There will be most important 10 break through in 2028, bringing both positive and negative effect 5. It provide scientific words and knowledge to support the main argument. Word. Sentence. startup A hot business startup in one market can transfer to other markets. stealth. He entered the room with stealth. execute. He was executed by treason. coy. She gave me a coy look from under the schoolgirl's fringe.
| Original | Correction |
|---|---|
| them them | them |
| packeges | packages |
| chims | crimes |
| litle | little |
| planing | planning |
| transit data | transmit data |
| most of the people | most people |
| side-effect | side effects |
| Our gene controls | Our genes control |
| if anti-aging do happens | if anti-aging does happen |
| with people have endless life | with people having endless lives |
| newborn keep giving birth | newborns continue to be born |
| it do becomes true | it does become true |
| baby- blobs | baby-blobs |
| as generative AI developing fast now | as generative AI is developing quickly now |
| these technology | these technologies |
| controlling certain disease | controlling certain diseases |
| child birth | childbirth |
| dilery | delivery |
| infect | effect or impact |
| Base edited baby | Base-edited baby |
| negative effect | negative effects |
| through gene by computers | by computers editing genes |
| responsibilities | responsibility |
| this people's life | this person's life |
| ethical concems | ethical concerns |
| lo important | 10 important |
| break throughs | breakthroughs |
| Ryan Lu design | Ryan Lu designed |
| age -reversal | age-reversal |
| 5 Biology technology | Five biotechnologies |
| shape future | shape the future |
| 2028 | 2026 |
| positive and negative effect | positive and negative effects |
| It provide | It provides |
| executed by treason | executed for treason |
| with stealth | stealthily |
| transfer to other markets | expand into other markets |
| add to | be added to |
| bring human affect | human interference |
| We were dealt with what we have by nature | We are given our traits by nature |
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Read & Respond. 1. Hafner began training AI agents in a world model, giving it the ability to plan ahead in real life tasks. 2. Ryan Lu design an age -reversal tech that could help restore sight. 3. 5 Biology technology are introduced, explaining how they would shape future. 4. There will be most important 10 break through in 2028, bringing both positive and negative effect. 5. It provide scientific words and knowledge to support the main argument.
Word. Sentence. startup. A hot business startup in one market can transfer to other markets. stealth. He entered the room with stealth. execute. He was executed by treason. coy. She gave me a coy look from under the schoolgirl's fringe.
Page 1 Q1: I think it is both, depending on how people use it. Of course they can be helpful if people ask them them to deliver packeges or execute tasks that are dangerous to human since they can predict future outcomes, completing complex tasks without real-world-trial-and-error-training. But it can be destructive when people use them to commit chims. With quick reactions and fast speed, they are unstoppable. Page 2 Q1: I think it is. Because while most of the people can enjoy the beauty of the world, those with glaucoma are deprived of this ability. By using age-reversal technology to treat the diseases can help people see the world again, which is ethical. Page 3 Q1: I think using AI to design new viruses has the greatest potential to improve people's lives. Because as generative AI developing fast now, using them to create the blueprint of DNA of viruses can enable us to use viruses as useful tools in life. From cleaning up pollution to controlling certain disease, this technology can affect all parts of life. Page 3 Q2: Firstly, governments should regulate the usage of these technology strictly, declaring the line between safe and dangerous. Companies should apply the new-tech carefully and keep them under control. Researchers should do sufficient experiments and do enough research to have a full view of what they are designing. With them, the new-tech will work for all people in a good way. Page 4 Q1: I think humanoid robots will have the biggest impact in our life. They can be applied to almost every part of our life. From companions to lifesavers and to dilery person. And the developing of these companies will bring huge infect in finance and policy.
Page 1 Q2: If I'm the robot, after being pushed over, my brain will search through world models I have been trained with, trying to find solution. I can see that if I keep this position, there will be a litle possibility that someone will help me up, and most likely, a truck will run over me, which gives me a shiver. Therefore, I chose to stand up by myself. Page 2 Q2: Firstly, they would worry about the side-effect of anti-aging. Our gene controls much more than we know, so simply changing one might cause unexpected issues. Also, if anti-aging do happens, the issue of population will be worse with people have endless life and newborn keep giving birth. The earth can no longer support such a growing population. But Lu may address the first one through careful research before putting anything into use. And about the second one, there will be regulation against overdone anti-aging if it do becomes true. Page 3 Q3: I am Paschal kija. My work is a device to treat postpartum hemorrhage - a dangerous bleeding complication after child birth. It's very meaningful to me because here in my country, the complication causes about 29% of maternal deaths. I want to use this technology to help my people. Page 4 Q2: Base edited baby may bring some negative effect. My point is it is a challenge to the meaning of human existence : if a person's trait can be changed through gene by computers, then who should take the responsibilities? What's the meaning of this people's life if it is just a program designed by others Since he/she was born. We were dealt with what we have by nature, but bring human affect in this process will bring ethical concems.
Page 1 Q3: It can help with transport regulation in the city. Because planing ahead for the unexpected allows AI agents to transit data of the vehicles' speed on the street to possible dangers that may cause, providing further plans or alarms before accident happens. Page 2 Q3: It works by introducing 4 key genes into one's body, which are OSKM, so the stem cell will then act as if it was plucked from an embryo. But adding all four will turn people completely into baby- blobs of stem-cell protoplasm, so Lu is keeping only OSK. Page 4 Q3: I think reversing the aging process to treat eye disease should also add to the lo important break throughs. This technology includes rewinding the age of cells by resetting them to an embryonic-like state. It may play an important role in treating eye diseases. Page 5 Q5: It provide scientific words and knowledge to support the main argument.