Homework Review — Junior · 2026-09-19

Junior Good 2026-09-19 · Earth and space discoveries: a weakening ocean current, a newly found monkey in Congo, and two 'super-puff' planets · Reviewed September 26, 2026

✅ Strengths

All four worksheet sections were attempted and turned in on time.
Vocabulary sentences for 'collapse' and 'density' are accurate, natural, and clearly show you understand the words.
The monkey summary in item ② uses a precise detail from the article (the orange-cream patch around the mouth and nose) and links it to the nickname — strong comprehension.
Item ③ correctly identifies the key scientific point that both super-puff planets have very low density.
You added a personal reaction ('We should protect Earth together'), which shows you are thinking about the reading, not just copying it.

💪 Areas to Improve

Cover all three articles in 'What I Learned' — aim for one new fact from each reading, not just the first one.
Never leave a 'favorite part' as 'nothing interesting.' Pick one number, fact, or quote and say why it surprised you.
Proofread for spelling before handing in: Scientists, cold, activities, proof, measuring. Reading your work aloud once catches most of these.
Watch verb forms after 'may' and other modals — always use the base verb (may become, may be, could get).
Match scientific names exactly when you copy them: TOI-791 b and TOI-791 c, not TOI-7918 / TOI-701.
Add a short definition in your own words for each new vocabulary word to make the section stronger.

📝 Exercise Review

What I Learned

Completeness: partial · Depth: surface

You wrote two ideas plus a nice personal closing, but all of it comes from the ocean article. The monkey and super-puff articles are not mentioned at all, and the worksheet asks for 2–3 new things from the week's reading. The science is also a little off: the article does not say the ocean will become cold — it says Europe could become much colder and Earth could become like a snowball if the AMOC shuts down. Rewrites: 'Scientests think the Ocean may become very colol in the future.' → Suggest: 'Scientists think the ocean current that warms Europe may get weaker, so Europe could become much colder.' 'I think all this because of human activitis' → Suggest: 'I think this is all because of human activities.' 'We should protect Earth together.' → good as is (add a subject for clarity: 'We should all protect Earth together.').

My Favorite Part

Completeness: complete · Depth: fair

You answered all three articles, which is great. Item ② is your best: you copied a specific detail (the orange-cream patch) and connected it to the name — that is real comprehension. Item ③ shows you understood the key idea of low density, but 'scientific prove' needs fixing: 'A lot of scientific prove shows that these two super-puffs are very low in density.' → Suggest: 'Scientific evidence shows that these two super-puffs have very low density.' Item ① is the weak spot — 'I don't find anything interesting' is not an answer. → Suggest: 'The most interesting part was that the AMOC works like a conveyor belt, and if it shuts down, Europe could get much colder.' Small fix in ②: 'So it got his name' → Suggest: 'So it got its name (an animal is "it," not "he" in science writing).'

New Words

Completeness: complete · Accuracy: good

'Collapse' and 'density' are both excellent choices — they come straight from the articles and are useful words. Your sentences are clear and natural, and 'The earthquake made these houses collapse' is a perfect example sentence. Two small fixes: 'measureing' → 'measuring', and remember that after 'are' we need the -ing form, so 'Scientists are measuring the density of gas' is correct as written once spelled right. Next time, try adding a short definition in your own words, e.g. 'density: how heavy something is for its size.'

Draw It

Completeness: complete

Your label 'The Orange-Lipped Monkey' matches the article well and is a good, clear caption. The extra sentence you added at the bottom, 'Our Earth may became very cold some days,' has a tense error: after 'may' we use the base verb, so → Suggest: 'Our Earth may become very cold someday.' Your planet names at the bottom should match the article exactly: TOI-791 b and TOI-791 c (not TOI-7918 / TOI-701).

📸 Homework Images

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What I learned
Scientests think the Ocean may become very colol
in the future. I think all this because of human activitis
We should protect Earth together.

The interesting part.
① I don't find anything interesting.
② Likweli is a monkey that has a bright orange-cream
patch around its mouth and nose. So it got his name
"Orange-Lipped Monkey!!
③ A lot of scientific prove shows that these two
super-puffs are very low in density.

Word
Collapse : The earthquake made these houses collapse.
density : Scientists are measureing the density of gas.

Draw: The Orange-Lipped Monkey.

Our Earth may became very cold some days.
TOI-7918
TOI-701

You finished every part of the worksheet, and your two vocabulary sentences are the strongest work on the page — both are clear, natural, and show you really own the words. Your 'What I Learned' shows a real personal reaction ('We should protect Earth together'), which is exactly what we want in this section. However, that section only talks about the ocean article, and it misses the article's main point: the AMOC current slowing down would make Europe much colder and could change weather around the world. You also wrote 'I don't find anything interesting' for the first article, which is not really an answer — every article has one surprising fact worth naming, so try: 'The most interesting part was that the AMOC could be 50% weaker by 2100.' Your monkey and super-puff summaries are accurate and nicely detailed. The biggest thing to fix is spelling: Scientests, colol, activitis, prove, measureing. Also watch verb tense after 'may' — we say 'may become,' not 'may became.' Your drawing label is correct, but the extra planet names should match the article exactly (TOI-791 b and TOI-791 c).

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