Student answered the Read & Respond items and the AI encoder/decoder explanation. However, Q1 is a specific detail rather than the main idea. Q4 is too vague. Q3 has grammar issues. Rewrites: 'used seals to measure deep polar ocean' โ 'used seals to measure the deep polar ocean'; 'A new research develope a decoding AI' โ 'A new research study developed a decoding AI'; 'keep the group peace and too coherent' โ 'keep the group peaceful and coherent'; 'The write provide Detailed information' โ 'The writer provides detailed information' or better, cite specific evidence from the article.
Word Bank entries are attempted but definitions are mismatched. 'flicts' is not a word; likely meant 'diffusion'. The definition 'the action of spreading in many directions' belongs to diffusion, not flicts. 'diffusion a female hormone that causes womb to prepare' should be 'progesterone: a female hormone that causes the womb to prepare'. 'progesterone. something to prevent pregnant.' should be 'prolactin: something that prevents pregnancy'. 'stow away' is correct but 'on other vehicle' โ 'or other vehicle'. Needs correction.
Student engages with opinion prompts and uses evidence (e.g., queen only produces scent when pregnant). Q1 for AI is unclear: 'I think it didn't' โ 'I think the risks outweigh the benefits' or similar. Q3 for mole-rats has 'calming, aggressive person' โ 'calming aggressive people'. Grammar: 'queen have to deliver baby' โ 'queen has to deliver babies'. Ideas are present but need clearer expression.
Creative perspective-taking. Seal answer has 'body dive' โ 'body dives'; 'sensor start' โ 'sensor starts'; 'for scientist' โ 'for scientists'; 'excited of' โ 'excited about'. Neuroscientist answer has 'develope' โ 'develop'; 'a anti' โ 'an anti'; 'need to be measured' โ 'needs to be measured'; 'any where' โ 'anywhere'; 'sth' โ 'something'; 'people paralyzed' โ 'paralyzed people'; 'use decodings' โ 'use decoding'. Mole-rat answer has 'aroma bring' โ 'aroma brings'; 'slow down there hormones' โ 'slows down their hormone'; 'keep them' โ 'keeps them'. Good imagination, but grammar needs work.
Personal reflection is genuine. Tense and agreement errors: 'Dove love science' โ 'Dove loved science'; 'settled to' โ 'settled on'; 'I tried vast hobbies' โ 'I tried various hobbies'; 'finally find' โ 'finally found'; 'I get a better understanding on' โ 'I gained a better understanding of'; 'It become' โ 'It became'; 'a open mind' โ 'an open mind'. Punctuation: 'piano. drawing' โ 'piano, drawing'. Needs editing for fluency.
No. Date. 2018 10. 3. I. Seals help Oceanographer. 1. I think so. As in the article, Dove love science I like physics and chemistry. She changed her majors like five times at her college and finally settled to atmospheric chemistry. This experience gave Dove rich knowledge in science that may help with her major. For me, I tried vast hobbies like piano. drawing, skating, dancing, basketball ..... and finally find my true love: drawing. Through this, I get a better understanding on who I am. 2. As my body dive deeper into the ocean, about 100 meters deep, the sensor on my head start working and measuring. I carefully move around, making sure that it can have a precise measurement for scientist. I felt proud and excited of doing this, yet concerned about how the sensors will slow down my movement. I hope scientist can make them small enough to reduce its weight to a minimum. 3. I tried cooking when I was seven and find myself unexpectedly enjoying it. It become my interest how. This experience told me that it's important to keep a open mind and embrace new things.
I. AI "Mind Reading" Tool. 1. I think it didn't. Once the technology is advanced enough, people will use it illegally. Like you can get a cap that looks normal but actually attachhed to sensors that can measure your brain activity. There are no secrets in face of this, leading to serious mental privacy issue. 2. I would develope a anti-brain measurement tool. Since the brain activity need to be measured by electrical tools. You could simply develope a warning tool that will give you an alarm if you're any where near an EEG or sth. Therefore, people paralyzed can use decodings freely while others have a warning in hand. 3. First, the encoder was shown with a picture and will predict brain activity from the image. Then the prediction is given to the decoder the to output a picture. If it's the original one, then the machine works well. If not, the two AI will revise themselves to reconstruct a new the.
Date. II. Naked Mole-Rats. 1. I think it's fair and is a form of cooperation. Because the queen mole-rat can only produce the scent that can prevent others from fighting when she is pregnant. Once she is not having babies, the other mole-rats will kill her, and the new queen will emerge. So others have to work, and the queen have to deliver baby - it's a fair cooperation. 2. For workers, the scent is honey and cool. Its sweet aroma bring peace to each worker's heart. They don't bother to fight or mate. Just to smell the sweet scent. For future queens, it's a deprivation. It slow down there hormones production in them and keep them from mating. The scent is something irresistible yet annoying. 3. I would like to investigate how the scent calms down naked mole-rats, from a chemical perspective, so to speak. Because this will give us a deeper understanding of the scent, and even apply to human, calming, aggressive person. down
Read & Respond. 1. Dove, An oceanographer who changed several majors before finally settling into her final role, used seals to measure deep polar ocean. 2. A new research develope a decoding AI, that can visualize what people are thinking through brain activity measurement is bringing an up-and-coming future for paralyzed people yet concerns on mental privacy. 3. Scientists found that the queen naked mole-rat can release a scent that keep the group peace and too coherent, showing a unique cooperation. 4. The write provide Detailed information. Word Bank. stow away. to hide on a ship, on other vehicle in order to escape from a place or travel without paying flicts. the action of spreading in many directions diffusion a female hormone that causes womb to prepare progesterone. something to prevent pregnant. prolactin.
| Original | Correction |
|---|---|
| Dove love science | Dove loved science |
| settled to atmospheric chemistry | settled on atmospheric chemistry |
| I tried vast hobbies | I tried various hobbies |
| finally find my true love | finally found my true love |
| I get a better understanding on who I am | I gained a better understanding of who I am |
| As my body dive deeper | As my body dives deeper |
| sensor on my head start working | sensor on my head starts working |
| for scientist | for scientists |
| I felt proud and excited of doing this | I felt proud and excited about doing this |
| I hope scientist can make them small enough | I hope scientists can make them small enough |
| reduce its weight | reduce their weight |
| find myself unexpectedly enjoying it | found myself unexpectedly enjoying it |
| It become my interest how | It became my interest |
| keep a open mind | keep an open mind |
| attachhed | attached |
| There are no secrets in face of this | There are no secrets in the face of this |
| I would develope | I would develop |
| a anti-brain measurement tool | an anti-brain measurement tool |
| brain activity need to be measured | brain activity needs to be measured |
| develope | develop |
| any where | anywhere |
| sth | something |
| people paralyzed | paralyzed people |
| use decodings freely | use decoding freely |
| the encoder was shown with a picture | the encoder is shown a picture |
| the decoder the to output | the decoder then outputs |
| reconstruct a new the | reconstruct a new image |
| queen have to deliver baby | queen has to deliver babies |
| Its sweet aroma bring peace | Its sweet aroma brings peace |
| It slow down there hormones production | It slows down their hormone production |
| keep them from mating | keeps them from mating |
| calming, aggressive person | calming aggressive people |
| Dove, An oceanographer | Dove, an oceanographer |
| used seals to measure deep polar ocean | used seals to measure the deep polar ocean |
| A new research develope a decoding AI | A new research study developed a decoding AI |
| up-and-coming future | promising future |
| keep the group peace and too coherent | keep the group peaceful and coherent |
| The write provide Detailed information | The writer provides detailed information |
| on other vehicle | or other vehicle |
| flicts | diffusion |
| diffusion a female hormone that causes womb to prepare | progesterone: a female hormone that causes the womb to prepare |
| progesterone. something to prevent pregnant. | prolactin: something that prevents pregnancy. |
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Page 2 Q3: First, the encoder was shown with a picture and will predict brain activity from the image. Then the prediction is given to the decoder the to output a picture. If it's the original one, then the machine works well. If not, the two AI will revise themselves to reconstruct a new the. Page 4 Read & Respond: 1. Dove, An oceanographer who changed several majors before finally settling into her final role, used seals to measure deep polar ocean. 2. A new research develope a decoding AI, that can visualize what people are thinking through brain activity measurement is bringing an up-and-coming future for paralyzed people yet concerns on mental privacy. 3. Scientists found that the queen naked mole-rat can release a scent that keep the group peace and too coherent, showing a unique cooperation. 4. The write provide Detailed information.
Page 4 Word Bank: stow away. to hide on a ship, on other vehicle in order to escape from a place or travel without paying flicts. the action of spreading in many directions diffusion a female hormone that causes womb to prepare progesterone. something to prevent pregnant. prolactin.
Page 2 Q1: I think it didn't. Once the technology is advanced enough, people will use it illegally. Like you can get a cap that looks normal but actually attachhed to sensors that can measure your brain activity. There are no secrets in face of this, leading to serious mental privacy issue. Page 3 Q1: I think it's fair and is a form of cooperation. Because the queen mole-rat can only produce the scent that can prevent others from fighting when she is pregnant. Once she is not having babies, the other mole-rats will kill her, and the new queen will emerge. So others have to work, and the queen have to deliver baby - it's a fair cooperation. Page 3 Q3: I would like to investigate how the scent calms down naked mole-rats, from a chemical perspective, so to speak. Because this will give us a deeper understanding of the scent, and even apply to human, calming, aggressive person. down
Page 1 Q2: As my body dive deeper into the ocean, about 100 meters deep, the sensor on my head start working and measuring. I carefully move around, making sure that it can have a precise measurement for scientist. I felt proud and excited of doing this, yet concerned about how the sensors will slow down my movement. I hope scientist can make them small enough to reduce its weight to a minimum. Page 2 Q2: I would develope a anti-brain measurement tool. Since the brain activity need to be measured by electrical tools. You could simply develope a warning tool that will give you an alarm if you're any where near an EEG or sth. Therefore, people paralyzed can use decodings freely while others have a warning in hand. Page 3 Q2: For workers, the scent is honey and cool. Its sweet aroma bring peace to each worker's heart. They don't bother to fight or mate. Just to smell the sweet scent. For future queens, it's a deprivation. It slow down there hormones production in them and keep them from mating. The scent is something irresistible yet annoying.
Page 1 Q1: I think so. As in the article, Dove love science I like physics and chemistry. She changed her majors like five times at her college and finally settled to atmospheric chemistry. This experience gave Dove rich knowledge in science that may help with her major. For me, I tried vast hobbies like piano. drawing, skating, dancing, basketball ..... and finally find my true love: drawing. Through this, I get a better understanding on who I am. Page 1 Q3: I tried cooking when I was seven and find myself unexpectedly enjoying it. It become my interest how. This experience told me that it's important to keep a open mind and embrace new things.